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大學英語六級考前熱點高分范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Employment Pressure Facing College Students. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)目前大學生面臨就業難的問題
2)分析導致該問題的原因
3)大學生應該如何應對該問題
Employment Pressure Facing College Students _______________________________________________________________________________
行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一個問題，提綱第2點要求分析該問題產生的原因，提綱第3的要求說明應該如何解決該問題，由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。
根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：指出大學生就業難的問題;分析導致該問題的原因;從大學生的角度說明應該如何應對該問題。
高分范文
Employment Pressure Facing College Students
[1]About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after their graduation. [1]But now, things are different. Today’s university students usually experience great difficulties finding satisfactory jobs. They often complain that graduation means joblessness. [2]What is the cause of this phenomenon?
[3]Firstly, with the enrollment extension of universities, [4]the supply of university graduates exceeds social demand. This results in a decreased chance for any individual graduate to find a job. [3]Secondly, university students [5]tend to spend most of their time at school in studying academic subjects and lack relevant job experience. [3]Thirdly, some students don’t study hard during the college. After four years of university life, they haven’t gained the knowledge those fairly good jobs or positions require.
[6]Facing the increasingly fierce competition, we university students should try our bests to change this situation. [3]Above all, when in school, we should make the most of our time and [7]put our heart into our studies. [3]What’s more, we can take part-time jobs and attend social activities in our spare time to [8]accumulate relevant practical experience. [3]Besides, when we apply for jobs after graduation, we should [9]attach more importance to accumulating experience than to the starting salary.
【亮點點評】
[1]過去和現在進行對比。
[2]設問句引出原因，容易引起注意。
[3]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
[4]“大學生供過于求”。
[5]“傾向，趨于”。
[6]“面對日趨激烈的競爭”，現在分詞作狀語。
[7]“用心學習”。
[8]“積累相關的實際經驗”。
[9]“更加關注”。
佳句臨摹
1.佳句：Facing the increasingly fierce competition, university students should try their best to change this situation.
臨摹：經歷過艱苦，我們就會更懂得如何應對危機。
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2.佳句：They should attach more importance to accumulating experience than to their starting salary
臨摹：很顯然，我們應該更加關注一個人的能力，而不是他的學歷。
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【KEY】
1. Having experienced hardships, we will know better how to survive crisis.
2. Obviously, we should attach more importance to one’s abilities than to his degree.
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